Fun little story. For some reason I was expecting a horror movie twist there by the end. Then again, the old ‘one of you might be the father’ game is pretty horrific too. I liked how the selection of cars lent itself well to establishing setting and characters.

just freakin good but my imagination makes it creepier and kinkier why did you leave this up to the reader some of us shouldnt have to let our imaginations run wild. rthank wyatt i loved it.
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I’m obviously slower than the others – it took me a while to figure this out. Must admit, I felt the story needed more tension – either something more conflicted in the narrator, or more specific detail on any of the characters…
As an aside, I knew a friend of a friend who fell pregnant during a weeklong sex binge so she actually had four possible fathers, and had to wait for the baby to come out so she could tell by its colour…