LOL! great devious insidious story. i love it! :D

sorry, couldn’t resist…

Evil indeed sir, beyond description!

yeah it is evil

Well, I’ll give you criminally insane, but genius?

the frustrating part is editing the uneditable.. yeah I made that word up.

hey mess congrats on winningh the radiohead challenge even though i thought i swhould have won….lol just messin wit ya congrats

Why is it I always discover that I’ve won or been featured or whatever through other stories? lol

CAUSE THAT IS THE ONLY TO CONTACT YOUR PUNKASS Boy Wonder…i also wrote sequels on our series…l am also laughing like a fool now just be glad you won lol

young gods was inspirational it changed how i feel about god for real

Hmm… if y’all don’t mind, I think I might take this in another direction… rubs hands together in plotting fashion

Feh. Didn’t turn out the way I wanted it to, the sequel did. Ah well. At least I kept my word.

@g2 best laid plans of mice and squares….lol

Okay, that was pretty killer. :)

Insidious…

Waitasec, “its hard to tell there even their” !!!! It has begun! :p

And the other “there” was wrong too!

I believe Oy has finally uncovered the true terrorist plot.

The original insinuation was that I’d written a virus that would screw around with grammar rules in people’s writing. That way, the ‘there,’ ‘their,’ and ’they’re’ would get switched up, and the apostrophe would be switched around in “its” and “it’s” and other things like that. Little grammatical errors that most people wouldn’t notice, but things that we as writers notice because, well, English is our passion. Grammar is part of the territory.

If you look closely at the italicized portion, you’ll begin to see the slew of subtle errors I threw in.

And look at my comment in the challenge, too. :-)

hey mess this is your secretary i dont have any messages for you today lol

lol thanks, you can go home early today.