Yes, I know perfectly well that this isn’t quite what the intent of the challenge was. I try to rein in my inner grammar wonk, but it never works. I hope you like the story, anyway. :D

Awesome…

creative license invoked! I liked the story, the twist at the end is sinister, and delicious.

Very cool. Kudos.

good real good i mean just good
rps you only gave it four? really?
i mean really?
she has a grudge against you text stop being so mean.lol

Ah, the always cut-throat world of wizardry. Hope that wizard is smart though. In the words of Rage Against the Machine, “F—- the G Ride. I want the machines that are makin’ ’em.”

Nice job with the play on words! Very creative. It’s hard out there for a mage…