ooo, nicely done!!

Didn’t even think of that…

lovely twist at the end :)

ooh i like this! very good =)

yeah, thanks for explaining this to me. I was so lost!

thanks for reading it elsha i know its not normally your cup of tea. i appreciatte you.

Interesante, amigo….

I think your twist may be better than mine……
DAMN YOU!!

i think your safe i have never ever won a challenge even the one i entered eleven times.
but i didnt use irony did i?
dang that probly why..

Hey, neither have I,
not even the one I entered 7 times (though it was the same story)

i stayed up almost two days writing all the entries in the profile challenge
you should read them some are my best stuff.

wowww this is really good! I’m gonna enter the challenge but I don’t think I can compete with this.

yeah that’s kinda what i was thinking sis! such good stuff…

Yeah,
Mighty Joe, I loved all the stories you put in the Profile challenge, but, I mean…
theres no beating the LoA.

Time for some shameless self promotion,
I would love it if someone could read my short story “Noir”.
It was put up here in twelve parts,
and… I really like and would like to see what others think!
Oh and great story.

Style, beautiful imagery with a jagged edge, punchy pacing, it’s got it all. Bravo, sir.

Loved it! =) As it started off, I wasn’t quite sure what it was about but as I reached the end, I was smiling.

thank you

Interesting, wild, raw and edgy. Fabulous! Dark and beautiful, enticing. A cut above. Unexpected, surprising. I loved it. -Stealing plums