Meh.

this is nice wierd but nice
i like it

I think my only big thing is the sentence, “After I opened five boxes, I had five Bratz dolls sitting next to me, staring at me with those big heads.”
something about it… eh.
Maybe if you could stretch it out, I can’t believe I’m saying this on Ficly of all sites, but use more words!!
I wish I could give half a pencil

wait, I meant three and a half pencils.
Not just half of a pencil as a rating.

that’d be mean, muffy

also

I really freakin’ hate those bratz dolls……

Wow… Bratz have always scared the bajeezus out of me. THEY DONT HAVE FEET!! What is with no feet thing? Ugh..Nayway, I liked this story. Very good. And creative. Thanks for entering! :)

That was funny =D