What a manhoe!
Nice dialogue at the beginning—the build-up was nice—but while the ending was supposed to be anticlimactic, it was…well, anticlimactic. I guess that can’t be helped. Good suspense though.
dear god… oh whew
dear god…
oh
whew
RockPaperScissors 
Stovohobo 
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