“the smirk of a malcontented kneebiter with a Napoleon complex” Priceless! best description!
I’ll get to it shortly! Hahaha!
Hehe. I love how the character was so wrong. I can just imagine the jaw dropping when Gary turned out to be such a bright and happy kneebiter!
Funny twist. I love the self-confident and cynical assessment being thus far frustrated. Very nice job getting across your protagonist’s character.
great controlled pace too…
“What fresh Hell is this?” Best line in this series so far! I love following where this narrative is going.
“What fresh Hell is this?”
Best line in this series so far! I love following where this narrative is going.
That was amusing. I love how the character keeps getting freaked out about what other people would consider an ideal work environment.
That was amusing.
I love how the character keeps getting freaked out about what other people would consider an ideal work environment.
Great descriptions and a very funny advancement of the story.
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