I really enjoy this. It’s very sad-but-true, and it really speaks to me.

Small correction: the “its” in line 7 should actually be “it’s”.

thank you. and sorry, I normally dont put anything like apostrophes in my poems, I’m not really sure why..

Ah, it’s not a huge deal. I notice these things naturally, but it ultimately doesn’t detract from the poem.

I know, I’m the same way, I notice every single small grammar mistake, so it is sort of ironic that I don’t use it in my poems.

=D

Well then you’re being creative, or individualistic, or some other fancy word like that.

Yes, I am being idiosyncratic, aren’t I? And divergent, contradistinctive, mismated, and incommensurable. I love my thesaurus.

Sad poem, but very well written!

divergent, contradistinctive, mismated, and incommensurable these are qualities of a good poet

“passion smile laughter and butterflies”
FOUR PENCILS!!!!!!

very sad poem but written fantastically girl keep it up