Awesome. Really great parallels there turning all of the metaphor/analogy things for love the other way around to very aptly described why love hurts so darn much.

I always like to believe the phrase that love doesn’t hurt. rejection hurts. being alone hurts. love doesn’t hurt. good story. i liked the examples.

Okay, you really rock ending lines. And I think that’s the most important part. Screw the beginning, the middle, it’s what people read last that really hit them. And I love the ending to this.

I also actually enjoyed the beginning and middle part too. It’s something I can definitely relate to at this point. Not the love part, just everything else.