Comments on Poor Edna by OrangeOreos (LoA)

ElshaHawk (LoA)

tetanus? wow, crazy.
- Posted over 10 years ago.
g²LaPianistaIrlandesa

XD Most oddly amusing thing I’ve seen all morning. I’m speechless, frankly.
- Posted over 10 years ago.
Render

hahahahahahahahaha. i was laughing before i even read this poem. your humor is infallible. FIVE PENCILS!!!!!
- Posted over 10 years ago.
- 5 out of 5
Eloquent Mess {(LoA)}

I thought for sure it’d be cavities, but NOOOOO, apparently she doesn’t get her vaccinations either.

Well done!
- Posted over 10 years ago.
- 5 out of 5
g²LaPianistaIrlandesa

Oh, one nit-picky thing I noticed regarding meter: The second line’s just a tad too long. Perhaps it could be “Who never brushed before bed-na.” It’s not perfect that way either, but it’s just a suggestion.
- Posted over 10 years ago.
OrangeOreos (LoA)

Thank you Gwen! That’s what I had in my mind before I decided to write it down, but then I forgot how I had it before, and couldn’t figure it out!
- Posted over 10 years ago.
invisibility_disability

“Poor Little Johnny… He should’ve brushed his teeth.” BEST POEM ENDING EVER.
and this reminded me so much of it. :D hahahaha!
- Posted about 10 years ago.