haha! way to use the same style I did and write a clever, twisted, and silly poem. Awesome manipulation of the nice elements to evil.

Yeah, the rhythm of your poem seemed to fit what I wanted to do. Poetry isn’t really my forte, but once in a while I like to try. :-)

this is a good poem i love this
and T S does have a comedic side read puffrock
i think this is awesome

Hilarious and whimsical little anti-poem. I can’t say I like tales where evil wins, but I do enjoy a good skewering of some the conventions of poetic verse.

This is great. It’s well written, it doesn’t feel awkward, and it’s kind of funny, just to think about it.