Comments on Intuition of Infatuation by THX 0477

g²LaPianistaIrlandesa

I was a bit jarred by the sudden switch from third person in the previous one to first person in this one. And, it’s probably just me, but I was rather confused as to what was going on in this one.
- Posted over 10 years ago.
THX 0477

Oops, thanks for the catch. I’ll go in and switch it. Somehow it wound up first person in my head.
- Posted over 10 years ago.
Mighty-Joe Young (A.K.A Strong Coffee)(LoA)

dang this is epic i love it
- Posted over 10 years ago.
- 5 out of 5
Textual Phoenix

Must! Have! More!

Who is the lady in black stockings? Where is she taking Janine? Why was Ricky convulsing?

Tune in next time! Same Bat-time! Same Bat-channel!

(I hope.)
- Posted over 10 years ago.
- 5 out of 5
Eloquent Mess {(LoA)}

ZOMGWTFBBQ??!

What’s happening!?‽
- Posted over 10 years ago.
- 5 out of 5
ElshaHawk (LoA)

yeah, I’m lost, lots of sudden action, and many many questions.
- Posted over 10 years ago.
Coccinella

I’m with Textual Phoenix. Please. Carry. On. Soon.
- Posted over 10 years ago.
- 5 out of 5
`spacetowrite

must read more! <3
- Posted over 10 years ago.
- 5 out of 5
Robotech_Master

This is kinda seriously creepy. WTH is going on. Did I miss a memo somewhere? :P
- Posted over 10 years ago.
- 5 out of 5