I like the freeform nature of this poem. It tells a story, isn’t confined to a rhyme scheme, yet still comes across as beautiful.

This is really simple and beautiful.

look this is wrong just last week i was slaying this five headed dragon to kiss a frog.
It didnt turn into a princess but there was a dragon.

Yeah, sorry MJ, but frogs usually turn into Princes…
not PrincESSes.
that being said, your poem was whimsical.
And I loved it.

oh yeah
five pencils

thanks:)

“and childhood dreams must end..`` Very bittersweet and true…