Lovely sequel, it fits perfectly with the theme of the first part. Great work!

I agree with St. Chuck, this meshes perfectly with the first one.

(I’ve noticed you like switching POV, don’t you?)

the daughter calls him matt? other than that, nice save, if it succeeds..

nice change of view

What if she’s not really his daughter, yet he calls her his daughter to only help her? Ooh, my thought process is so… suspicous…

Well, racing, that’s what I was going for… but it’s up to the person who sequels!

excited to see where all of this goes. I’m confused about “matt” too, but it definitely leaves lots of room for the next writer to have some fun.