So deceptively eeeeevil. It begs the question though: which lovely herb was the culprit?

And what had he done to deserve such a perfect dinner? Lots of fun.

Little formatting comment…I realize that the character limit of Ficly is a huge challenge, but I would suggest editing your piece rather than using a ‘&’ in your stories.

Oh, and welcome to Ficly!

I tried…I had to go back and use the ampersands because I had like 0 characters after editing about 20 times.

Thanks

Great story my love…and Ill be picking up some KFC for myself tonight. I never even noticed the & until Jess pointed it out.

And I couldn’t decide which herb and I thought if I said something specific it would give the end away.

Nice. It’s enough to give the herb background, no need to tell us which one was the culprit. It reads nicely as it is. Shame about the ampersands, but I take your point about editing. It’s not always easy to match the sense of the piece with a prescribed length.

Wow, the ending really surprised me! Nicely written, well done! Come back and write more!