Dude, thats pretty awesome.
It keeps the tension dramatic while describing something man has always dreamed of in a way no one has ever thought of.
For this, sir, I applaud you.

O.o

Wait

…

So Sci-Fi and Fantasy are …

the same thing??!

wow that was freakin graphic vivd discriptiv and like five more words that end in tion, that was good

Wow. This was just a little idea I had that I typed up just before going to bed. I almost didn’t post it because I didn’t think it was all that special. But I guess we are our own worst critics.