ok this one had me going to the last wonderful execution and suspense.

this is a good story i wish you posrted more

After two reads I still didn’t quite understand whether this was a simple game or the battle between machine and child. Either way, the writing style was amazing, and I don’t think that my inability to understand should downplay your ability to write, so 5 pencils!

Wow! Definitely have to agree with MJY- excellent execution. I’d love to see more of your work on Ficly.