I feel like this…EVERY DAY! =/

Well… Yes, I can see that you’re bored.

Some comments:
- “when your on the net” should be “when you’re on the net”. “Your” is possessive, it means you own something, it is your something. “You’re” means you are, as in you’re doing something or you’re at home.
- While your boredom might seem overwhelming, there is plenty to be done about it. Writing a poem or short story, maybe reading ficlets, going to the pool for a swim, finding a great new book, or (if you’re old enough to drive) going out in your car, getting lost, and finding your way home again. There’s plenty to occupy your time.

Finally, this was pretty good. It felt to me like it went on a little long, but I’m assuming that was intentional, kind of an emphasis of your point. Good job!

I hope you keep writing, I’m excited to read your work.

yeah i know hopeless lol and mess i changed it lol thx for that error find, yeah i do just need to get out there and do something ill take your advice and thx

you on cuzz..?

huh mob..?

sweet icon darch!!!

nice icon

thanx piano and mjy

you can draw, or I can send you a bunch of links to inspirational websites.. I like to share my inspirational websites, because we all get… bored.

yeah links would be cool