I borrowed the phrase drop dead boys from watership down. so shout out!! i dont think its plagerism if i mention it right?lol

shame shame, deflowering..

my only grammar beef: this poem is about girls, plural, so the line when she looks back, should be when they look back.

My fav. part is the goosebumps racing to get to the brain before the fear. :)

Pretty good stuff. Me, personally? Locked away.

sorry i had to work on the lilies and cigerettes one so i made this little notice in the meantime.

oh, great now my comment is moot.. thanks.. ;)

i did it just to piss you off

dang i hate it when i rate me own it just highlights auto on mine and i have to undo it unlike the other way around without safari

Moot, and furthermore, bollocks. Bollocks, sir. Bollocks.

@science this is a tough crowd. you still gave me a three. well i’ll just have to get better

Damn.

You beat your Poem Kids pretty hard.

Extremely entertaining. It makes me happy.

thank you PYT I hated the other poem i wrote so much i wrote this