This is inspired by the picture found at http://theshinyrock.deviantart.com/art/Unforgettable-134555956 so take a looksee :P

Neat sunset pic, but you’ve added so many more colors!
Pet peeve, the text-type ‘u’ instead of you.. kind of irritates me. But I read around it and found some colorful imagery, an aching desire and regretful sadness. :) remorse.
so, who died?

Sorry about that :P I was trying to cut down on characters since I was 34 over :P Something had to go.

Well written, except the aforementioned “u.” But I understand.

Yeah, the ‘u’ thing bothered me enough for me to stop reading. Then I saw the comments, so I went back and tried again. This is definitely nice description, it’s a shame it was marred by the character limit. I guess the ‘u’ thing just bugs me too much.

Ok, I did some editing. The ‘u’ thing was too big of a distraction for everyone. I always second-guess my editing, so I was reluctant to go through with it.. Hope it made this more enjoyable to read though >.<

This was really good. :)