You heartless git. Well, it might be worth it if you make the heist…

hahaha
NICE

I love the idea of a tear-inducing virus! We want more!

i was going to call it the pagliacci virus but i didnt think people would follow that and if it does add to the story it takes away from iut. thanks Abstract.

so that’s why your eye stung.. clever! and poor girlfriend.. but girls can get away with emotional outbursts.. this is crazy!

doesnt add i meant

Baby when you first told me the idea you had for this story i thought you were way to drunk to write this. Well as it turned out you must have been because you changed it from the black tears challenge, to mine. I think you might have changed it because you didn’t want to compete against Mess and muffy in thier genre, so you reworked your good story to compete in your genre. You are a sneaky devil that is why i love you.
I loved how the cigerette companies ran the world, and he was robbing them, that was awesome.

Isn’t hot and steamy a horrible environment for electronics? I hope the internet-goers are thoroughly insulated.

poor, poor girl. oh well… haha =)

oh don’t worry blue i bailed her out of jail and then bought her some nice new prosthetic xray eyes, she forgave me.

Clever, clever, clever. Good opportunities for prequels here… Please?

The hot-house was a brilliant concept. Sounds like a Blade Runner sort of world – I imagined everything all hot and neon and dark and depressing, with building-sized advertisements everywhere. Nicely done.

Thank you uselssness, that means alot.

ya.. very cool idea – great descriptions in there.. that’s your strong suit right there!!

Oh, nice… sobbing… really? Nice, though.

This was great! Very tangible.

<3

Theoretically, diamond/carbon nanotube/graphene processors will be able to run at hundreds or thousands of degrees without serious performance hits, so the hothouse is definitely brilliant and plausible. And the tear inducing effect? A marvelous idea, although with human emotions perhaps not the best idea? I dunno, maybe a more reliable effect would be to make the offenders dance while lying down, or raise their hands or something? How many people would have their tear ducts surgically removed in this world? Does the protagonist?

thanks science

You cad. Fancy givin’ up Jessi to cover your own backside. I am out of my depth in this genre.lol

Well, sobbing does not specifically require tears. Perhaps the body just goes through the motions without actual tears, since MJ did specifically mention “bawling”, which is quite different than silently shedding tears.