Robotic uprising, but on the good side, and without robots? At least I hope they’re not totally robots. I think it’d be more interesting if they were something else, like a mix between the two (but I can see how it’s been based around them being machines, so nevermind me). Still, the story’s really good, so keep doin’ what you’re doin’.

oooo i like the real brainwashing!

This is sexy. SEXY SEXY SEXY.

It needs to win. (From the ones I’ve read so far.)

I concur with Stovo, I’m seeing this main guy as more of a cyborg… like, the brain’s a computer, and perhaps a limb or two are cybernetic, just to mix things up a bit.

I hate the idea of a dystopia, but for some reason I love to read stuff based around them, especially if it’s well-written, as this one is.

Good to see you back in action, uselessness!

Oh god, I see the massive, epic fight scene coming! Good work! I love it! :D

Oh, and by the way, continue this on or you WILL die. and by that I mean you will die of pity for us all, not being treated to your story genius. :)

A bit of the feel of Voltaire and Joan of Arc in Greg Bear’s Foundation and Chaos. Good stuff. More to come?