oh my god this is sick. it is like ronin meats chrome meets the heist. This is real cyberpunk. I smell a winner?

omg it was so beautiful.this story…..i love how you draw one in with the language and then bam!!! i’m fighting off my husband right now so he cant sign to our pooter now and tell you how great you are…..it is taking all the kung fu i know….ok ….geez……he wants me to tell you that yo are great…(and i agree…really im equallly as smitten)

i was so befuddled i forgot pencils you are really the last of the real cyberpunks,you and bluefish.

her Mantis style was no match for 38 chamber budha palm, and i got control of the computer. Once again this is really an awesome story.

Oh nice!
I like this very much.
Although….. I did notice a lack of sex with machines…

I looked at the AirPort config on my MacBook and it said that this story was operating on a network called “Awesome.”

Am I the only one trying to figure out what s and q are? Or why such a simple equation is important?

Abstract Rorschach’s comment had me cracking up. Cool story, I love a good tale of betrayal. Is Franglais real or did you make that up?

@Not You & @Mighty Joe: I am glad you enjoy. The response here gives me the feeling I should attempt to expand on this fragment.

@StudMuffin: http://bit.ly/sexwithmachines (completely PG rated, not what the URL sounds like)

@AbstractRorshach: Thank you.

@DoItForScience: It’s a secret. It’s a “McGuffin”.

@uselessness: Frenglish’s prettier cousin. Franglais is just a mixture of french and english that grew in the 1970’s. Francais + Anglais = Franglais. (http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Franglais)

umm i don’t know a lick of french so all i got was that they were pwned by a single rogue, which be worse if it were a n00b. :)

Heh…. wetware…

“Let’s see if Burn’s wetware matches her hardware…”

@ElshaHawk: Honestly, most of it is cursing at the beginning. That’s where the “!mature” comes in.

Googled McGuffin.

Education +1!

congrats on the feature