Comments on How Dark These Edges of Edelweiss by Acantha

Vail Indigo

I definitely loved the last two paragraphs. The predatory tone, is unnerving.
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- Posted over 10 years ago.
.:Band Baby:.

oooh, i like this. i like the tone and the word choice. very nice =)
- Posted over 10 years ago.
- 5 out of 5
Nancy

this is freaking awesome.
- Posted over 10 years ago.
- 5 out of 5
N. Robertson

Reminds me a bit of mewithoutYou and also of a poem my brother wrote a while back.
- Posted over 10 years ago.
jesteram

I second Vail Indigo. The last lines are chilling…
- Posted over 10 years ago.
- 5 out of 5
strawberrymint

Hmmm. Like the setting you’ve created with the tone and diction. The passion he feels for her is so evident, I quite forgot this was a challenge for colors. All in all, great job!
- Posted over 10 years ago.
- 5 out of 5
Pyropunk 51 (PPP LoA)

Great work, congrats!
- Posted over 10 years ago.
- 5 out of 5
Acantha

Thank you for the kind words, everyone! There were so many great ficlets for this contest, and I never expected mine would be chosen :) Thank you so much!
- Posted over 10 years ago.
Nancy

So happy to see you won this challenge. I totally would’ve picked it, too!
- Posted over 10 years ago.
- 5 out of 5
Aurelia

Fantastic! Beautiful imagery and a really creepy ending.
- Posted over 10 years ago.
- 5 out of 5