What I like about your writing style is that it is clear and doesn’t contain a lot of extra fluff. This was easy to read & the ending leaves you hanging.

This is fantastic! I love every inch of it :)

I’m really tempted to sequel this, but I don’t think I could live up to the greatness :)

NinjaChicken – Thanks! But don’t slice me with your sword

Acantha – Don’t be silly. Your Quixote story is twice as good!

Very cool, my friend.

I love how it sounds all mystical and epic like a fairy tale until the last line. This could really make a nice series I think.