well, they wont’ find each other now..
great twist!

the moral of the story is good sex can ruin your species’ no just teasing
the moral is beer is good after a long day of mind erasing

hey why did it rate me this pc is crazy

Heavy with dialects, your writing style never ceases to impress. It always has this sort of informal air to it. This is a really good story though. Well done.

Wow… Sad ending. Fun story, though.

I GIVE IT A FIVE!!!

Wonderful story, wonderfully edited. Props to both of you.

yeah this was the cat’s meow. you are going to have a hard time keeping your streak alive and not winning this challenge

hahaha @ Not You
But, in classic MJY style, this was fantastico.
Bravo! Bravo! Arivaderci, or however its fucking spelled.

I was gonna print it out to read it but took the plunge and read it on line. You all really think Adam has gone…..?

Hey Marli in my original story Frank was reading this from his diary because after finding out about erasing lillith and adam he then erased his own memory, but that was too much.

Oooooh, delectable – I like erasing his own memory! This could be a good script. People love stuff that delves into the origin of the species, especially if you get there and its not human.

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thanks thief and fish and elsha

crazy good, man, “I Just erased Adam”
great stuff man.

Congrats on the feature.
grrrrrr

Wow. Toppermost stuff.

Great ending…

I might even sequel and break the unspoken rules of miniseriesdom. _{Thanks for the bar, again.}

Soulmates cannot be kept apart. Period. Everyone knows that. Just see “Eternal Sunshine of the Spotless Mind” or the first “Butterfly Effect” movies.

Fate may play games, but it can’t keep true love apart.

As always, great story.

Dude jesi was online last night crtacking jokes with sophia and mask and elsha and tonight she is in the icu and doctors say they arent sure is gonna make it till friday.
MAN I AM IN A WORSE SPOT THAN I HAVE BEEN AND KRULLTAR THOSE WORDS JUST GAVE ME SOME HOPE.
Thanks for that comment.
please all of you keep her in your prayers and hearts.

To evryone on ficly my wonderful amazing wife the only woman i have ever loved passed away last night. She loved you all keep her in your thoughts

Jeez God I hate coming in late. You will never be able to shake Jesi. Her spoirit will be with you through this lifetime and on in to wherever you go next. That girl loved you more than life and she will be with you with or without a body.