Comments on Not You, Not Yet by Eloquent Mess {(LoA)}

ElshaHawk (LoA)

wow mess. this is too much! so beautiful!
- Posted over 10 years ago.
Eloquent Mess {(LoA)}

I know Jesi enjoyed reading my fiction, she told me so on a couple occasions. I wanted to write some fiction for her as a gift.

I hope she likes it.
- Posted over 10 years ago.
Marli

But Mess, how could it be fiction…it seems so real.
- Posted over 10 years ago.
- 5 out of 5
Eloquent Mess {(LoA)}

It is fiction simply for the inclusion of my favorite personification.

Everything else, I’m sure, is fact.
- Posted over 10 years ago.
Rachel Addison Miller

I did not know Jesi…but this is beautiful. I’m sure she loves your tribute.
- Posted over 10 years ago.
- 5 out of 5
A girl in a dress

That was beautiful, she really would love it
- Posted over 10 years ago.
stargazer1960

You paint a lovely picture of a woman I wish I had known.
- Posted over 10 years ago.
natalief

I did not know Jesi but find myself wanting to know her better albeit too late. I have tried searching for NotYou and Jesi but that only returns ficlets with her name in them. Do you happen to know the link to her ficlets?
- Posted over 10 years ago.
- 5 out of 5
Eloquent Mess {(LoA)}

http://ficly.com/authors/user-1523
- Posted over 10 years ago.