I had a feeling that was coming, but it’s still a good story, now I’m just wondering what happens next :)

not liking the word panickly, but i know you ran out of characters!
this is a precarious situation, no car, no house, i hope he has a cell phone..

I’m with ElshaHawk, it’s a great story, well-paced, but I’m not feeling “panicly.” :-)

i did not expect them getting lost but i expected that the baby was coming!