This is very interesting – let me make sure I understand. She is much more comfortable when the sun goes down than during the day? Even venture so far as to say she is afraid of the day?

I’m a definite night person, I get much more done and I am much more awake when it’s dark outside. So, I think I can relate. I enjoyed the read, thanks!

Two stories in, and you’re putting me to shame.

I stand in awe.

Yes, the anxiety in accountability, responsibility…it was less trite in my head. ;-)
I feel you…morning should be illegal.

interesting perspective. Personally, I didn’t like the dark but I loved night time, if that makes sense :D

I like it, a slightly different take on the meanings of light and dark. Makes me think of the twisted version, “Always look on the bright side of life, and hide on the dark side where no one can see you.”

I completely relate to this story. I have always found solace in the dark, at night.

Do, get, achieve.
Interact, help – but don’t get in anyone’s way.
Stumble, rise, apologize.

That’s what made the story for me. Great job!

Beautifully written and perfectly paced. So many people forget that pacing is still important in microfiction, but this is just great.