Comments on Under the water, above the stars by Match

Abstract

Reading this makes me feel as if I’m there.
- Posted over 10 years ago.
- 5 out of 5
Eloquent Mess {(LoA)}

So beautiful!
- Posted over 10 years ago.
- 5 out of 5
emily.ruth

Really well written, I love the concept of the title and the last line.
- Posted over 10 years ago.
dkscully

Oh, very nice. I can see this place!
- Posted over 10 years ago.
- 5 out of 5
ElshaHawk (LoA)

this is smooth, like his dive.. so was he wearing the shirt and pants?
- Posted over 10 years ago.
Krulltar

beautifully descriptive and placed me in the frame of mind of the character: 9 stars. No ninjas or pirates: minus 1 star. Overall score due to ficly limit: 5 Stars!
Don’t spend them all in one place.
- Posted over 10 years ago.
- 5 out of 5
Kater

Really beautiful, I was able to easily picture the whole scene. Now I wonder what led him to take a swim?
- Posted over 10 years ago.
- 5 out of 5
stargazer1960

Lovely imagery. I really like how you described the Milky Way and the sounds.
- Posted over 10 years ago.
- 5 out of 5