Comments on I'll story tell you well by Twyst

April Raines

gigglesnort Ok, but shouldn’t this be sequelled off of Muffy’s since it’s his you’re ‘editing’?

Nice use of subtly and innuendo – or maybe I just have a dirty mind this afternoon.

Not sure where the ‘out’ in line 2 came from, edit-wise, but hey it works.

Good twist, Twyst.
- Posted over 10 years ago.
- 4 out of 5
Krulltar

gigglesnort ?!?! WTF?

fun edit of studly’s story.
- Posted over 10 years ago.
- 4 out of 5
Twyst

Originally I was going to replace key words with other words, as you see ‘roof’ was replaced with ‘out’. Then I just went and chopped out a bunch, forgot I had a different plan, and posted.

btw I love the word gigglesnort, almost as much as baconflaps.
- Posted over 10 years ago.
ElshaHawk (LoA)

Well this didn’t flow, it was way too choppy.. you should have stuck with replacing words like a Mad Libs..
I’m confused about what you are doing here, it’s like half a painting..
- Posted over 10 years ago.
Twyst

A poet never interprets his work, sorry, it’s up to you to find meaning!

Isn’t it so much easier when you don’t have to explain your bad writing to anyone by claiming its exactly what you meant to do? What fulfillment I find in pretentious art!
- Posted over 10 years ago.
The Fantastic Mister Fish

i dont get it.
- Posted over 10 years ago.
StudMuffin (LoA)

teehee.
Only thing, Lily is my SISTER!!!
Maybe you should like…. sequel my story with a mad libbed version or something.
Oh, hang on…..
- Posted over 10 years ago.
Eloquent Mess {(LoA)}

O.o?

You’ve lost me.
- Posted over 10 years ago.