Awesome Racing,I love it

Great job Racing. Very interesting.

Very fast-paced and hectic, fits very well. My only issue is the tense-issue at the beginning. It’d be easiest to switch the first little bit (“My footsteps slap on the hard asphalt as I run”) to past tense, but something you might consider doing is switching the tense of the whole thing to present tense. It gives it more urgency. But, I think it’s working in past tense, so I say you just switch that first bit.
Other than that, though, I’m definitely curious.

Fixed. :)

In medias res, I see.