This is beautiful!
“Impossible sounds, intricate melodies and harmonies followed by sweeping, emotional undertones… " < Wonderful sentence!

The only thing I’d change is that the mother’s dialogue here feels forced…maybe someone else in the crowd should say it’s a miracle, or maybe leave that out. I think she’d be too shocked to say that in the moment.

Yeah, I felt that line was awkward as well, where she spouts off about it being a miracle or something.

I didn’t like that, it felt too cliché.

Maybe I’ll revise it.

Revised.

This is epic win. i enjoy it.

did you mean to say “oh my gods?”
i was unsure

ah, they will attribute the miracle to him.. one thing, I thought bards sang?

Yes, because in this world there are many gods.

Bards are musical, some sing and play the lyre, some rock it a capella, and this one plays the flute. He can sing, should he wish to, and with a beautiful voice, but he chooses to just play flute in this story.

Not sure what you revised, but I thought this worked well. I liked the rise and fall of expectation as it starts expectant, dips with the resolution of the boy’s condition, and then sweeps back up with the change in music. Wonderful storytelling in that way.