Uh… Okay. Very nice, mr. that guy ye like.

Brilliant. I think this author really manages to portray the message that “We have all been there”

getting a pic is like commitment, it screams, “i am going to be here a while read my stuff.”

nice pic

i have not been there. welcome to ficly. I have been here, watching this drama unfold before my eyes. the only thing that would mak this better is if i could FEEL it..

It needs more cowbell, no, wait… I mean It needs more commas. This ficly and it’s prequel are in dire need of better punctuation. It needs some capitalization in places, too.

I’m curious as to the age of the writer.

@ Eloquent Mess… obviously young. Hince the nicer tone of my previous comment.