I felt I rushed the end a bit, but it is what it is.

Mice throwing in the follower thing, so what about the son?

it’s only 1024 characters give me a break. I mean come on, they write book about God, and they still can’t figure out how it’s all going to turn out. Ok. Ok. How about this ending: That Jesus dude caught like the stiggy-mata and died. How’s that for a spoiler. Man, my muses are PMSing…

I’m amused by the office of the demi-gods.

I’m so, like, offended right now.

For real.

I mean, I’m really offended.

Because of how offensive this whole series has been.

Just so… Offensive.

Yep, downright offensive.

You’re such offensive offenders for writing this offensive stuff and offending me.

Wait…

Offend?

Off end?

Off the end of what?

A cliff?

A lock of hair?

My patience?

Your wit?

The earth?

I must find out the origin of this word… offend.

Oh, yeah, and this whole series is SOOO offensive to me right now.

Demigods are mortal (going by Greek myth), so I don’t think the removal from office clause applies to them unless they achieved full-fledged Godhood at some point. Not a big deal. My real constructive criticism is the shifty nature of Sheila/Shelia’s name.

Sheila/Shelia has been corrected. Demigods could imply alot of beings (male and female )if you don’t limit yourself to Greek myth.

Bizarre and twisted but still kind of fun and silly. I would be offended, but it’s just so ridiculous as to swerve right around any chance of actual offense.

Funny and entertaining. But I though Demi-Gods were immortal, but like they aged really slowly.