Interesting piece here but a few grammer mistakes, for example, ‘kids’ to be ’kid’s’.

That made me chuckle… It’s grammar not grammer :D Thanks for the tip-off though…

typo :)

I think you mean “Type O”

Love the series MH :)

I like this piece. The whole internal dialogue is great. I think one thing that I think would have been cool to see was at least one physical description indicating he’s looking through a character mask. Entertaining though. :)

Interesting.

I read this because instead of saying “cheese” for a picture yesterday, I was told to say “diversity” but nobody said it. LOL

Hilarious, and I can definitely picture the characters lol

brings a whole new meaning to visiting Disney Land. really liked the mouse saying cheese.

Hilarious and kind of sad too. Happiest place on Earth, my foot! I’ve heard they don’t wander the park anymore either, and you have to stand in line to get a photo. Nice job on a stream-of-consciousness.

it’s not that glamorous having to share hot sweaty costumed underwear either I imagine..
This paints a lovely picture of the typical family on a vacation they took just to check off on their to-do list that they had. Why do the Dursley’s come to mind?

this made me laugh =]

I can speak to some of the validity of this piece. Mickey Mouse grabbed my ass when I visited Disney World. Unlike in this Ficly, though, Mickey is usually a woman.