I like it, even though it had a stereotypical storyline that was reministant of Sunday afternoon westerns; the nature of this challenge sacrafices story/character developement for the sake of the climax, so the boilerplate plot ain’t that bad.
i agree with Krulltar. the deadman’s switch was a bit obvious.
OH DAMN! ;-) Sometimes a little predictability can lend itself to the excitement. This was nostalgic, and wonderful!
OH DAMN! ;-)
Sometimes a little predictability can lend itself to the excitement. This was nostalgic, and wonderful!
I like it. I admit I couldn’t help reading it mentally as a radio drama.