Ooooo! Intriguing!
Oh, nice little “cliff hanger” . . .
but did she? lol.. clever girl, but the falling is so.. dissatisfying, NO SHE CAN’T FALL, SHE HAS TO LIVE, you want to scream at the screen. :)
an “everyone dies” climax isn’t as satisfying as “the winner lives” good work on the “running through the woods” action sequence.
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