Wow…

The contrast between this entry and the action-filled others is wonderful! And this is very well written. Great work!

Indeed, I wanted to write one that wasn’t just gratuitous action, but I didn’t have nearly this level of inspiration! You also held out on the out-of-place exposition some of the submissions have fallen into (mine included).

This needs a little romance movie for a home. Nice work.

Don’t you love it when your minds are in harmony? *sigh.. Time just, stops. All that matters is the moment.
Very well done!

very romantic climax.

And the world went away.
^ That sums up everything amazing about love, it’s a feeling so many can relate to with fondness. This is a very nice, romantic and sentimental piece. Good job.

This was a VERY close second-place! Great job!