Cute little tale of love and its varied effects. Hope you don’t mind my sequel, which was not intended as a prediction or a portent, just a twist on the elements you used.
This is sweet. I like the way the characters interact with eachother, and I also particularly liked the line “After a moment of silence he apparently decided the world wasn’t perfect enough yet, and therefore must do some cartwheels.” It made me smile…a great ficly
Sam Ervin
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Lady Venuquin