Hilarious and very original plot with great twist! Very easy to get into the mindset of the character.

I saw that coming a mile away.. :) I like the action take on the story, rather than the being in the office with them.

liked the action and that final word could just as well have been “kaboom”

At least they didn’t just drop a bottle of potassium in there.

wanders off into la-la land, trying to think of chemicals that would release the hydrogen from the water molecule

Hahaha. Funny and very well written!

Highly amusing and nicely told in a convincing and endearing character voice. Not high art or anything, but really funny.