Blimey this is brilliant! I tried to wrote something like this, but couldn’t get the words out – you succeeded admirably…! Brilliant genre characterisation and suitably well-written yet implausible gadgetry, very good read! MH :)
Blimey this is brilliant! I tried to wrote something like this, but couldn’t get the words out – you succeeded admirably…!
Brilliant genre characterisation and suitably well-written yet implausible gadgetry, very good read! MH :)
OH HELL YES! An excellent story and an excellent entrant in an excellent challenge. Overall, I’d say it’s… excellent. Have five genuine cavalry pencils, far superior to the lead-sticks used by the Mystamulon foe.
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