What I Wish Would Happen (Part I)

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As I sit at the computer, typing away on the smooth black buttons on the keyboard, I hear a slight tapping on the door. It creaks open a little. I stop typing. “…Yes?” I have no idea who it is. “Rose?” My sister sometimes likes to play tricks on me, but it’s unusually late for her mischief. The door opens up more and a head of reddish-brown hair pokes in. My heart skips a beat. “…Jane?”

Her small, shy smile seems to fill up the room with its beauty. “Hi…” she says softly. “I had to drop by to say goodnight. I hate cell phones.” She stands there for a minute, looking at me, then I stand up and cross the few feet between us, our eyes locked.

“You look lovely tonight,” I murmur, completely sincere. My heart is beating so fast I’ve lost track of the number. I don’t care about that though. My body is pulling me forward, closer to her, but my self-control holds me back. “Take off your coat. Stay awhile,” I say, my voice a sheer suggestion of volume. Slowly, she removes her jacket.

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  1. Avatar Mr.Gabriel

    Hmmm. Interesting, is this girl a former friend? Lover? I’m looking forward to Part 2, but this one was very mysterious and lovely.

  2. Avatar ElshaHawk (LoA)

    Le sigh, juicy, and exactly like those fantasies that never come true. :)

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