Wow…this is powerful stuff.
I gotta say, though, I think you spelled the title wrong…=]

hehe oops

Lots of unanswered questions, the feeling that this individual is just being hurried through the justice system – another success story for the barrister…

You packed a lot in, so well done on that. I’m not actually sure you need that last line though, I think the verdict is implied in the penultimate sentence, but, just a thought!

Thanks for entering – MH :)

I think that the narator needs a little more fleshing out and depth. I also think that “corroborate” might be what you meant instead of “coordinate.”