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Avatar Author: Mr.Gabriel I'm an over analyzing, over opinionated, naturally perky, sarcastic, lonely, wanna-be actor who thinks his art is writing. _The Confessions of a Teenage Prostitute_: http://ficly.com/stories/10546 Read Bio

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I did it, I poisoned his drink and he collapsed. I cut his wrists using his hands so it looked like he cut himself to death and just left him in the bathroom. I stayed in the house in silence until I heard his mom scream.

I’m not a psychopath. No, really, I’m actually a calm and happy person. With a little evil in me, sure, but that doesn’t change who I really am. A normal kid you see everyday.

So I planned when I was going to kill him, doesn’t mean I’m crazy— I’m just intelligent. Intelligent enough that I investigated when his parents would be out for the night; made sure he had no plans that night; was sure his little sister was securely tucked into bed; was sure that he drank his soda after his favorite TV show, so I could sneak in and poison him. I even bought gloves for the occasion.

He got what he deserved. Karma’s a blind bitch and I was just guiding it; I was taking destiny into my own hands.

He won’t be calling anyone a faggot anymore. Even if I’m in jail and he’s in Hell.

Goodbye.

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  1. Avatar PJ (Jae) [[LoA]]

    Scared now. I don’t wanna read the whole of your biography.

    That said this is a really revealing story. Love psychopath-murder stories, me.

  2. Avatar Ruby Slippers

    Woah. Heavy stuff. Love the first line of paragraph 3.

  3. Avatar Gradual Uprising {LoA}

    haha…gabe! this challenge is an ¡Autobiography! please tell me you aren’t a murderous killer by day, ficly writer by night

  4. Avatar Mr.Gabriel

    Well, Ruby did say it didn’t have to be real, but I would do this…

  5. Avatar Gradual Uprising {LoA}

    haha ok

  6. Avatar someday_93

    Officially creeped out…

  7. Avatar Mr.Gabriel

    I have that effect on people.

    (:

  8. Avatar someday_93

    Now there’s a great personality trait for you…=P

  9. Avatar Shorty

    So, you killed someone, then?

  10. Avatar Mr.Gabriel

    Again, this is fiction…

  11. Avatar Shorty

    Right, but the challenge was to write a page of your autobiography. So, you’re saying that either you did kill someone or you think you’re likely to in the future.

    Or, you ignored that premise, in which case: The reason this challenge is interesting is because most fiction is 90-99% made up, with the remaining bit being autobiographical; here you’re given a method to reverse the ratio. Without that, you’ve just written any story, ever.

  12. Avatar Mr.Gabriel

    I asked her if it had to be real, she said no. So it’s a fictional autobiography.

  13. Avatar Shorty

    Yes, and I’m not saying, “You shouldn’t have done this because it’s against the rules of the challenge.” I’m saying, “You shouldn’t have done this because it’s boring.”

  14. Avatar Mr.Gabriel

    Well, apparently it isn’t so boring, considering I got some pretty good reviews.

    Of course, I can’t expect all reviews to be good, but how about we take a look at some of your stories?

  15. Avatar Shorty

    Feel free. It would be silly of me to discourage legitimate critique.

  16. Avatar Violet Turner

    I’m sure you’ve read Edgar Allan Poe – the middle paragraph is exactly like the tell tale heart!!

    Enjoyable, and the line about blind karma was excellent!

  17. Avatar Mr.Gabriel

    Thanks Violet! And no, actually I haven’t read Edgar. But maybe I should start getting into literature, I’m feeling so left out.

  18. Avatar Music-Hearted

    Love it. Is it bad that I’m not creeped out? I also agree with Violet— read some Poe, I think you’ll find some interesting parallels.

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