02 twenty-four (part 1)

Avatar Author: yuna sixteen. female. realist. impulsive thinker. reader. writer. creative-ist. procrastinator. i find salvation in sugar and honey and oatmeal cookies and i hide my fears in coffee cups. all i need is inspiration. and ... Read Bio

‘Marry me.’

Addison blinked. It was an order, not a question.

She fought the urge to giggle at his forthrightness.
‘Oh, Scott,’ she said, grinning at her boyfriend’s somewhat blushing face.

Scott grunted, looking down at her face, the beautiful face of his girlfriend of a year.
His grip on her hand tightened, his eyes narrowing irritably.

‘Addison,’ he growled impatiently.

‘You’re so cute.’ She grinned when his brow twitched in annoyance.
His eyes darkened as he glared at her as if to threaten her to say what he longed to hear.


‘Why not?’ he snapped, pulling her closer. Addison smiled.

She took steps backward until his hands left her face and hand. ‘I will marry you…if—’ Scott glared at her dangerously. ‘…you accept my challenge.’
He raised an eyebrow.

‘Live a day without me.’

Scott’s face darkened. ‘No way—’

‘A day without communication between us for 24 hours.’


“You can only talk to me after 24 hours.’


‘And I promise, I will marry you if you pass the challenge.’



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  1. Avatar Catherine

    This is just making me angry because I’m never going to know if they get married. And i know I’m probably stupid for asking but what’s TBC?

  2. Avatar ElshaHawk (LoA)

    to be continued..

    only you won’t continue this..
    will you?
    and I think their personalities are different here, if not, then kudos. If I were to sequel the first one, I’d make the running Addison’s fault, and Scott would still be madly in love with her.

  3. Avatar yuna

    haha, sequel away if you want to that one, :]
    well since this is only part 1, of course i shall continue! already written drafts for it, but this one will probably be one of the only ones to recieve sequel(s).

  4. Avatar Mr.Gabriel

    Like her character.