You Don't Always Need Protection

Avatar Author: Mayra I'm a Pre-Law/History student from Puerto Rico. I own about ten Moleskines and I only use Pilot pens. I'm convinced I was born about seventy years after I should have and I'm a firm believer in the (future) existence of t... Read Bio

Darren’s mother is always on his case about the same damn thing. Wear your helmet. Wear you elbow pads. Don’t forget the long sleeved shirt. Yadda, yadda, yadda. I mean, Jesus Christ it’s only a freakin’ skateboard. He’s thirteen. Young and spry, he can go 20 mph and stop in a second without falling off. And if you could see him jumping the school steps… Awesome.

Today, Darren’s heading for his friend Joey’s house. Joey just got a Playstation 3 for his birthday. They’re having a marathon session of Halo, Call of Duty, and some porn Joey scored from his older brother. Darren has a change of clothes in his backpack, a three-pack of popcorn and a sleeping bag. And then his mother’s voice from the kitchen reminds him to wear his helmet, elbow pads and the long sleeved shirt. Whatever. Joey’s house is a block down. You don’t always need protection.

And, honestly, it’s true. What he could have used was a new pair of glasses. He never saw that gray Sedan coming.

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  1. Avatar One Time, One Chance

    Wow!
    I was not expecting that ending. Brilliant twist!

  2. Avatar Mayra

    Thanks a lot :)

  3. Avatar Spiderj

    Ouch.

    I like the way the kind of nagging tone (yadda, yadda, yadda), with the italics to add a whiney teenage quality to it, then gets turned around on Darren with that italicised ‘could’ in the penultimate sentence.

    It’s a nifty and original take on the challenge title!

  4. Avatar strawberrymint

    Narrative really brings out the character. Like the twist at the end!

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