Kind of a full-on cyberpunk twist to the original. I definitely was not expecting that. I got more of a noir feeling from the first, but that’s a very subjective thing.
I like that you took a very simple prequel and added some real intrigue to the premise. A full on government conspiracy maybe from what is basically a Catholic priest’s job.
Interested to see if you have more, or if this was just a one-off piece.
John Perkins