I apologise in advance for any mistakes regarding tense…..

Shiny, I read it as a super-hero’s descent into madess and super-villainy, but there’s a lot more than that going on there.

I like the idea of someone who is homeless, disposessed, angry and paranoid actually having the power to strike out at society. It would make social politics a tad more immediate.

I like it! I definitely wouldn’t have called a voodoo of sorts in the beginning of the story, that caught me a bit of guard! Nicely done!

I mean “called a voodoo doll of sorts…”

Creepy! I think it’s interesting that the main character is still conscious of their appearance while broken in madness.

Awesome! So didn’t see the doll coming…nice turn of events. Unexpectedly pleasing, in a very bloody way! ;)