I really, really enjoyed this. Although you only actually describe the character of Charles, Timothy’s personality comes across strongly as well…

A great piece, which I intend to mull over before perhaps taking a stab at sequelling. Bravo – MH :)

Very tragic and does a nice job of capturing that upswelling of pity and the regret following a decision made in the midst of that emotion.

great description fill this mundane scene with emotion. :)